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We are a class of year 7 and 8 students who attend a semi-rural school on the outskirts of Tauranga in NZ. We are excited to share our experiences and learning at Tauriko School. Check back regularly to see what we have been up to. We have a load of fun in our class and would love to share it with you!

Wednesday, 19 September 2012

The Gingerbread Man retold by Troy




4 comments:

  1. I love the way the fox spoke with a 'slant in his eye'. I could picture his face. I really enjoyed your fairy tale. You might like to try to vary the start of your sentences by using different words than 'then' to make it even more interesting.

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  2. Great story writing Troy. Good punchuashon

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  3. Great story Troy.

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  4. great work Troy! We are pleased you are enjoying writing tasks at school.

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